Game Night by Nada_Rakshasa (critique requested)

Game Night (critique requested)

Nada_Rakshasa

17 February 2014 at 22:16:54 MST

I've been tinkering with this story for a little while now. My recent experiences with gaming and gamers inspired this piece.
While I feel like I could still continue this narrative (at least long enough to find some form of actual plot/conflict. sigh), I feel like I've reached a reasonable stopping point for the moment. More may come, or it may not. I also suspect that I may have ironically edited myself into some grammatical errors... As always, constructive feedback is much appreciated. Thanks for reading. ^^

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