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Slave to the Machine by Mistress-Phantom (critique requested)

Slave to the Machine

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Slave to the Machine (critique requested)

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You've been given a job interview at MirageCorp International. You don't know much about them, but you're willing to give it a shot. You've hated these big corporate-type jobs, though... and you're afraid you'll end up just another slave to the machine.

This has been in the queue for way too long; more than a year. I recently forced myself to restart and finish it up. It's a simple concept that ended up getting way too big; I scrapped most of it and slimmed it down. That said, :iconairrider1: and :iconrubbervixen: both had lovely entries that I ended up not using. Maybe I'll submit them in another file at some point.

C&C welcome. Feel free to suggest bug fixes or offer content.

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Rating:
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Category:
Literary / Other

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    I love interactive fiction. You get a watch from me :>

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      Very well written. If I find time, I'd love to contribute to the project.

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    Unfortunately it seems the link is dead