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Besieged Ch.16 by Mecha-Mightyenador (critique requested)

Besieged Ch.16 (critique requested)

Mecha-Mightyenador

The group starts to splinter and crack. With Azur and Taze rapidly devolving into bitter enemies, the real enemy isn't wasting any time. And while the Empire may be busy with other violent elements, they are still capable of focusing their eye on the young heroes.

Oh boy oh boy oh boy! This is gonna be so awesome! grins big I can't wait for you guys to finish this one. Something super awesome occurs during this chapter...hell this entire chapter is just super awesome.

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