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Alex Dragon Concept art by maugryph (critique requested)

Alex Dragon Concept art (critique requested)

maugryph

Concept art for a new 3d model I did of Alex, the co-protagonist for my comic Alex and Cruz (Alexandcruz.com)

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    Hey, I thought I'd say something because you mentioned critique. And you might not agree, but hey-
    The bright red on this dude's clothing clashes with the pale yellow quite nastily. I guess it could work if you wanted to make Alex look more nervous and uncertain, but if you were looking to make him look like a tough guy, you could make the red a touch darker. Like what they did with Superman in Man of Steel.

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      Thank you for the crit :)

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    While the clothing's looking good (to my eyes), the dragon's body seems a bit... smudgy? I don't know that that's the word. Artistically it's fine and looks cool, but if you intend to create a 3d model from this, you may find it frustrating to pin down details on the body in a three dimensional space. It does seem that some of the bigger shapes are foreshortened and positioned correctly, so that's a good thing though.

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      Thank you for taking the time to critique my painting :) I agree the skin needs to be pushed more

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        I think critique is important~

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          I totally agree. It is the best way to improve.