Underage, p2 by MaskedDragonNamedLin (critique requested)

Underage, p2 (critique requested)

MaskedDragonNamedLin

2 November 2016 at 21:46:20 MDT

Last page of this little short, Looks like Lorrai took the reigns over this situation~ No bull shit on her watch. In the future, I'll try doing more of these, which would be posted after I finish putting up old stuff, which should be really soon.
Anyways, please let me know if you think there's something my comic-making could improve upon, or if you maybe have suggestions for situations (as short strips like this) involving my babs, I'd love to hear from you!
First: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/1399415/underage
Art, story, and characters belong to me.
Don't steal.

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