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Koozen by Luxiay (critique requested)

Koozen (critique requested)

Luxiay

Name: Koozen (Blue Shark)

Age: 26

Size: 2m 34cm

Hobbyes: Bodybuilding, going to the beach for see down and sunsets, he likes to collect strange little balls and crystals he find on the sea.

Other things: He works in a boat rental and shop, he doesn't use to get lots of visits because people says his face it's a bit scaring when they look him from outside of the shop, he's not a bad guy, he's a bit shy and quiet, sometimes uses to wait outside the clientele for see if come someone. He wants to have friends, but people doesn't like it, he's a bit scaring with his huge body and killer eyes.

In resume, he's a Blue Shark, huge, who likes boats and wants friends.

Submission Information

Views:
500
Comments:
6
Favorites:
6
Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

Comments

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    dont hit me with that anchor please.

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      Koozen: Don't worry i won't do that.

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        and actually, my sona is 250cm i guess i am chubbier XD

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    Wow! He's tall!!

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    Awesome job on this! The coloring really helps highlight his size.

    Now, you did request critique, so I'll give you a bit. Your anatomy is very good, but there are a few things wrong. The obliques (the muscles beside the abs on the side) go a bit too high and onto the lats (the wide muscles that come off the sides from the back under the arms). The arm that's holding the anchor doesn't have the upper part of it positioned correctly. The upper arm is positioned as if you had the arm facing downward like the right arm is, but the bicep should be rotated up on top and the triceps on the under side of the arm. Here is a good example https://www.weasyl.com/submission/280918/blastoise . The forearms could use a little bit more mass too, but they seem okay and they're really hard to get anyways.

    Other than that, the picture is really good! I look forward to seeing more from you!

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    Big Shark <3