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The River Daughter by LurkingWolf

The River Daughter

LurkingWolf

This is an unofficial sequel to 'A Match Made in Moonlight.' It follows a lot of the same themes and explores some more possibilities in the setting.

Not quite as proud of this one. In retrospect, I think some of what made the first one a favorite to me was how the first person perspective blended with the material to make the descriptions very personal. This one feels good, but never reaches the level of its predecessor.

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598
Comments:
3
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Rating:
General
Category:
Literary / Story

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    My cheeks are going to hurt if I keep smiling this much. It's rare that I find a literary gem such as this - it's a really neat concept that you presented really well.

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      Thank you for that high praise! I really don't feel like I deserve it, but I'm always glad when someone enjoys my stories.

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        Well, I wouldn't've said it if I didn't mean it. You did well with the third-person limited viewpoint - the feelings are strong.