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Starscayle - The Beginning by Mohiten (critique requested)

Starscayle - The Beginning (critique requested)

Mohiten

A short story inspired by 'Understand' by Ted Chiang, and artworks from http://www.furaffinity.net/user/meanybeany

A young engineer lost in space finds herself rescued in a way she hadn't expected, and must figure out how to make the most of her situation - while her rescuer has his own ideas in mind for her.

Features transformation, dragons, and a little bit of existentialism.

My first real try at something with the subject matter at hand, so constructive comments, critique and feedback are always appreciated.

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