120618 Otter Lance by Lumi (critique requested)

120618 Otter Lance (critique requested)

Lumi

6 December 2018 at 17:42:17 MST

Was thinkin “What if Lance was part otter?” So it lead me to this otter cat hybrid version of Lance. What do you think?

I also posted this on Patreon https://www.patreon.com/posts/23174247

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    In my opinion, its look pretty cute!
    I like the color scheme and the simple but cool style this was drawn, i don't see much anatomy errors. However, the face expression feels a bit empty, there is a smile but the eyebrows? Are a bit static so there is no much emotion in the eyes and it feels that he is staring blanky at me.

    Overall, good character design! Just keep in mind you can make a more "lively" expression :>

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      thank you!! I've still got a ways to go in drawing toon stuff so I'll definitely think about those expressions

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        Your welcome~