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062916 Sefris by Lumi (critique requested)
Cel Shaded full body commission for Sefris on twitter <3
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Hi I say that you requested a critique for this! Overall I like the pose that you chose and how well you make the character look balanced! Its nice to make a character look like gravity applies to them ha! I guess my only suggestion would be to try playing with the thickness of your lines some! Have fun!
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Thank you very much, I do what I can to make a character seem like they're real
yea I see what you mean in retrospect about the line thickness. Usually my thickness is more varied than that I think my tablet pen was having issues but it wasn't coming out that bad so I didnt worry about it
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She's got some interesting markings on her tail and neck.