two characters I'm working on for my little faux mlp style comic I'm going for. I had a little problem with the colors, but I think I like them for now. The characters are LackLaster the one to the left who is the main protagonist, the other is named Helot no. 00

Helot is just a servant, as is LackLuster, but Lackey has a role, where as Helot is there to help Lackey. I could really really use some critiques and help with drawing in this style.