Spectrum by LaurenRivers (critique requested)

Spectrum (critique requested)

LaurenRivers

29 June 2014 at 13:40:25 MDT

Summary - After an event that alters the flow of modern history, the world becomes chaotic. A trio of resistance fighters stumble upon a long forgotten weapon, whose return sparks both sides to action...

Starring:
Lauren Rivers, aka Blue. laurenrivers
Susanna Carver, aka Red.

Fritz Jansen, resistance soldier paulshep
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3660899

Sabah Alev, resistance soldier. MrBitchin
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2217492/

Emmy, resistance member. emeraldskunk
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2695602/

Katherthan Zeal, Resistance Leader kazer
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2569661/

Kelvrin Firkin, Scientist, Blue’s programmer. kelvrin
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3052248

Murdock, Lead Villain ladysin
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3756058

Pete, Operator for Indigo, Red, Green, Yellow, Orange, and Violet. skunkman001
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2040710/

Violet Star as Lead Enemy Soldier. violetneko
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3873376

Guest Stars
Teric as Operator of Independence Radio teric