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Unraveled [ORIGINAL] by Kraest (critique requested)

Unraveled [ORIGINAL]

Unraveled [ORIGINAL] (critique requested)

Kraest

Cold surrounding
Ever entrenching
So numb and blind
I can't feel anything

Waiting for the glimpse of light
A ray in the dark a piece of hope
My body aches from waiting
I've waited so long

Breathless inside
No sense of time
How long have I been
This darkness can't last

Cold pouring into the holes in me
I drink it all and it leaves me dry
Paper thoughts have abandoned me
How long can this darkness last

Thoughts awakening
They won't let me sleep
A void inside and out
I want to feel again

Waiting for the glimpse of light
A ray in the dark a piece of hope
My body aches from waiting
I've waited so long

A lackless garden
Sowing death and loss
No nourishment left
But this darkness can't last

Cold pouring into the holes in me
I drink it all and it leaves me dry
Paper thoughts have abandoned me
How long can this darkness last
This lifeless garden all I know
It drinks my all and it leaves me none
I can't cleanse myself of all this loss
My hands are clean but it stains my soul

I run
(Can't hide)
I fall
(Dead inside)
Can't stand
(My sight)
I've fallen to my knees

Cold pouring into the holes in me
I drink it all and it leaves me dry
Paper thoughts have abandoned me
How long can this darkness last
This lifeless garden all I know
It drinks my all and it leaves me none
I can't cleanse myself of all this loss
My hands are clean but it stains my soul

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