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Stockholm Syndrome [Original] by Kraest (critique requested)

Stockholm Syndrome [Original]

Stockholm Syndrome [Original] (critique requested)

Kraest

6 August 2015 at 18:04:39 MDT

ANOTHER RERECORD

I had a spare half hour between loads of laundry and homework, so I figured I'd do another one.

Stockholm Syndrome

Verse 1
Words are wasted upon you
Never listen to the logic that we share
Time and time again
We're broken by misunderstanding
I hope you see what you've done
Before it's too late to change

Verse 2
Tired insight falls again
Words are dying long before
They reach the air
Time and time again
This endless exercise futile
I hope you kill this abomination
That you call love

What love is this?

Chorus
This isn't what I expected
You tell me love and show me lies
Broken promises cast upon us
Tell me love and lie again

Break
I can't take this love (x4)
Cast your fires
Spill the fuel
I can't take this love (x2)
Cast your fires
Spill the fuel
Cast the fires
Burn it all

I can't take this (x4)
Love

What love is this (x2)

This isn't what I expected
You tell me love and show me lies
Broken promises cast upon us
Tell me love and lie again
This isn't what I expected
You tell me love and show me lies
Broken promises cast upon us
Tell me love and lie again

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    Utterly profound. I could feel it fornicate my soul with every tingling vibration its melody exuded.

    I like the progression, the diversity, and the change of pace, as well as structure.
    You also manage to demonstrate the versatility, the charisma, as well the raw power of your voice, a power which was very evident in the Break.

    Also, you quite enticed me with this song. From an artistic viewpoint, I am very fascinated about the Stockholm Syndrome and the potential it can for exploitation in art, especially music and writing.