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Ch 1 p10 by Klebkatt (critique requested)

Ch 1 p10 (critique requested)

Klebkatt

Now to get into the actual story.

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    In the third panel, is the lady's right hand supposed to be that big?

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      No, it should be smaller. A hand is the size of a human face. This art is very old and done when I was new to drawing in general. I'm still not very good at hands, honestly.

      Thank you for pointing it out. I'll make sure to correct it when I redraw these pages for the book.

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        Yeah, hands are pretty hard to draw. I have to go over mine on occasion.

        Actually, I asked, because given that there's mythical creatures in the panel with her, It could be a clue that she's not a human at all.