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Art/Species/Hybridixus © me 2013
Constructive criticism is welcomed
This is the last WIP since I'm not sure that I'm not going to show the finnish version.
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To answer I can tell that it's almost done. The sky is quite done with black lines and darker, not sure I should turn the white lines in the clouds yellow or not. The ground is almost done, only a little black is left there. ... oh, and not to forget, scanner might kill the colors, or just the red.
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Are you using some sort of scratch pad medium for this by chance? Also this was up for critiquing, thought I would put some thoughts.
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I thank you for the critique, I shall try and finnish the few last bits of black on it.
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scratch pad medium? Not sure what that is, I'm only useing a few pen that makes black line to color all the black in this. Then Red and yellow for shadow and light, leaving a few white places as they are.
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Your tree is the center point and I really do like the texture you are employing for the bark. I notice that in the night sky that there is no defining textures, unless it is the dim scaling used, though they remain quite less noticeable. I think that your should use more defining featured textures for the sky to contrast with the earth and the creature.