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I don't know what I was thinking when I created this.
This drawing makes no sense to me at all. The pose is weird and the expression is weird, it doesn't fit well at all.
I could use some help here, so leave them in the comments if you have any advice.
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Hello, thank you for the critique!
Thank you for the advice regarding the wall, I had no idea what to draw on the upper left side of the drawing so I just left it blank.
I realized that this was a mistake the moment that I posted online.
I hadn't thought about putting a shadow underneath his arm that would've helped the drawing greatly!
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Erana
The weight is a bit off, yes, but you already know that. Everyone makes off pieces; the faxt that you're not afraid of it speaks volumes to your mettle as an artist.
You have some very interesting perspectives in the other work you've posted so I don't want to interfere with that. However, I will say that the classic trick for odd weight shifts with bipeds is to (mentally) draw a line down the character where you believe the center of gravity is. This helps to judge if the character is leaning enough.
Also, the fact that the wall has texture and the background doesn't makes the wall recede visually. You could prevent this by either giving the background some distant features to contextualize the space or give your character's leaning arm a shadow.