This looks really good actually, I like the colours and the background makes the drawing itself pop out more. If there is something I would record you practice on then it would be the eyes, face proportions and hair shape. The eyes are not symmetrical-ish for the angle the head is and the right one is a bit deformed. If you want a redline just tell me.
Overall it's really really cute <3
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NekoHimi
This looks really good actually, I like the colours and the background makes the drawing itself pop out more. If there is something I would record you practice on then it would be the eyes, face proportions and hair shape. The eyes are not symmetrical-ish for the angle the head is and the right one is a bit deformed. If you want a redline just tell me.
Overall it's really really cute <3