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Eternal Joy and Sorrow by Hopeful_Devoid (critique requested)

Eternal Joy and Sorrow (critique requested)

Hopeful_Devoid

Two emotions,
eternal in being,
bounded to our mortal form.

The piercing sorrow,
the wounding joy,
scaring our soul,
warping our body.

This is mortality,
the pain, the bliss.
This is you,
this is me.

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    I would really appreciate some comments concerning possible improvements, or at least some support.