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Days To Come by Hedgehodge (critique requested)

Days To Come (critique requested)

Hedgehodge



Quietly I keep you close to me,

Quietly I feel you when I'm dreaming.

Follow the feeling,

but patiently waiting,

I lose my feelings to oblivion.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1hWi-vgoaU

This project took over a week, and I spent a whole night on the crystal alone.

Big ups to klaufir and emikochan for the advice they gave me on this picture, and to roxypop for sharing the track that inspired this thing ^w^

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    Good work on this. The effort you put into the crystal definitely shows, it turned out great.

    The scene as a whole ties together quite nicely. The only thing I would suggest would be to adjust the saturation of the grass bits and land on the right as they recede to the horizon. As you reduce the saturation add a bit of the sky's color to them to give a distance fog effect. In addition, your clouds should be a little more random. At the moment they are all clumped in the center of the sky, implying more of a smoke pillar rather than clouds. I would suggest breaking them up a bit and have some of them go past the edge of the canvas.

    The character is good, though a little stiff looking. It would have been nice to see more dynamic or fluid pose on her.

    Keep up the good work!

    Regards,

    ~B-Man

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      I KIND OF DIDN'T REALIZE I FORGOT TO FADE THOSE GRASS BITS UNTIL YOU POINTED IT OUT.

      I'll have to keep that in mind in future.

      and yeah, the clouds could have been better. But I was trying to break out of my habit of how I usually draw them X_x

      and yes her pose is a bit awkward. I can't seem to ever poses very well.