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Germany X Cat!Reader by Greyfeather (critique requested)

First off: (f/c) = Fur color

(e/c) = Eye color

For you, my friend, my little friend who is a inch taller than moi! This is for you, for a friend who stuck with me thick and thin, let me just tell you I'll make this as detailed, funny, adventurous and long as I can, JUST FOR YOU! cx Thank you, one of my most loyal friends I ever had, though we hated each other at the start, but, we soon discovered you have a heart of gold, and thank you for standing up for me, you do not know how much it meant to me, I can't even explain how much I am still grateful for you, just being you, and being my friend. Oh god, England stop it, I can't- Auuuughhh Swifty I <3 you, more than a best friend should, haha, well, my goal is to get 1000+ words for each page, so cheer me on! And nag me to put the papers in the binder you gave me.

Oh how your day sucked, despite being a bit pampered by humans that took pity over you, fed you, petted you, but, sometimes even shooed you away from their children. Despite being a scrawny, matted little kitty you were you didn't give a damn at all about your own fur and health. Even though the small snacks where okay you only ate once a day at least, you tried to eat large meals but something always came to interfere with your 'Perfect healthy meal'. You had the tendency to linger around the park though, it was fun running there on the large track, and you had often seen a large, blonde and blue eyed man, occasionally followed by a loud obnoxious man, and a short, shy and quiet man, You, personally preferred either the blonde or the quiet one really, though you never wanted to approach them yourself but, you wanted THEM to approach you, so, you decided to find a way to be noticed, your small paws soon took you to the gravel coated track and started your little run, your appropriately long fur dragged at you as your little paw's ran. "When is that human going to get here?" you had grumbled, pausing in your tracks, your (e/c) colored eyes scanning the large open area for the men or man. "B-But Germannyyyy! I don't wanna ruuuuunnn!" Shouted a young sounding man, "Oh shiz, must be them, and that obnoxious little kid man-thing!" you grumbled almost miserably, slowly starting to pick up speed again, running was nice yes, it was exhausting but it felt nice as the small breeze went through your fur. "Shut up Italia, me you and Japan are running" He grumbled loudly. "Oh my goodness, there he is!" you had lowly meowed, picking up speed, your (f/c) tugging even further. though, despite the drag you held your skinny tail high. To you, it felt like you had run a mile, and slowly began to feel exhausted but pushed on, having the brain the size of a small apple you just HAD to show off yourself to the large blonde man, yes you were a cat, but that doesn't stop you from having dirty thoughts about a different race? "Haha, course not!" you semi-scolded yourself as you ran. Soon bumping to what it felt like, it was either a leg or a small, stiff, fluffy, and small tree. Nope, defiantly a leg. "What the heck maaaannnn!?" She meowed.

Japan's point of view~

By my leg, a little bump was felt, my brown eyes peering over the small backpack seemed to be a small (f/c) cat, supposedly anyways. "Germany-san... isn't this cat cute?" he said ever so silently, grabbing the cat, which to his surprise it hadn't ran. Tracing his thumb over the rough fur over the little cat he slowly brought it over to the blonde, holding it out as if it was to be inspected for something.

Back to you for a little~

'Oh my, so close to this man, oh god!' you thought vigorously and started fidgeting in the hands of the presumably Japanese man. "Mrrow?" you let off a small meow, As if acting as the small, innocent and cute type of animal. "OWW!" you angrily hissed, a sudden tug at your tail, as if triggering a boats horn. You, were of course pissed, this man just pulled your delicate tail! You, retaliated violently, your small, torn claws tearing forward as they aimed with a malicious intent to kill this man, though it seemed too violent to do so, but you had to at that very moment. The most hyper of the three retracted, pelting at high speeds away and behind the blonde, now known as Germany. Immediately forgetting about the tug of her tail she turned towards the Japanese man and back to Germany, your tail curling as if it was a hook of some sort.

Germany's point of view.

'Very unlikely for Japan to pick up a cat, but after all he has spent a lot of time with Greece before..' Germany gave a huff. "Vhy are you holdin' a cat Japan? Is the cat hurt?" The German pondered, reaching towards the (f/c) colored cat, brushing the fur up to properly inspect the small feline. "werr it bumped into me, so I don't rearry know, it courd be brind" The Japanese man pondered. "Maybe..." Germany sighed, coming to eye level towards the cat, receiving a small squeak from the small creature, placing a thumb above the eye Germany pulled up gently, seeing no signs of damage to the eye, but managing to notice many bumps, cuts and dry blood. "zhis cat isn't blind, but is still in bad condition, I am even surprised it let vou pick it up!" He huffed lightly, not very willing to bring a cat to his home, most likely it'd be tormented by Prussia, Italy and some others...

"Fine, I vill take the cat, only to be healed and fed properly, zhen, I vill take her to the kitty center..." He muttered, obviously not sure of his choice, he could manage to hide the cat for long enough for her to get better anyways,,,

"Get on with your laps, Japan, Italy, I'll accompany you soon" He grumbled, turning towards the bench, shoving his hand into a small kit he brought some clear liquid and a small patch of gauze and dampened it, the cat seemed to understand what he was doing, seeing as how it's small form tensed and the fur began bristling, "It vill only hurt a little bit" The German man instructed lightly, pressing the small bit of soft, damp feeling fabric against her wounds, receiving a menacing hiss from the cat, Germany slightly retracted but continued, trying not to feel discouraged from the hiss and possibility he'd get mauled by the small thing. Soon enough the German man wrapped the cat up in his jacket tightly, putting away the equipment and started his run.

______Time skip brought to you by pink sludge___

Laboured breathing, that was all that could be heard by you at least, as you looked over with your bright two eyes towards the bent over happy-go-lucky man he was completely spent, not to mention the same for the Japanese man, but was the complete opposite, he wasn't even heaving! Like come on! You let off a small huff and tried to jump out to great the German man, only to be roughly held by the happy man. Letting off a vicious hiss you violently thrashed, before he had placed you down you managed to rake your claws right down his hands. Sending the man running with tears streaming down his cheeks behind Germany. "Veee~ G-Germany the kitty tried t-to-a scratch meee!" Complained the man, his cowering form clearly visible. "Italy, stop zhat, the little thing can't kill you" Germany grumbled. swiftly, the blonde grabbed Italy's blue uniform and with immense strength he lifted him and put him diagonal to himself. You let out a muffled hiss and wearily crawled over to the side of the German man. "Why does the kitty like you and not meeeee?!" wailed Italy. Germany reacted swiftly and grabbed the cat, putting his back towards the Italian, in a sort of protective way. You soon began purring rubbing your soft head.

Germany X Cat!Reader (critique requested)

Greyfeather

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    Awesome job I really like it even though the reader is just a cat X3