I can see a lot of hard work went into this! For critique i just need to say that your proportions and anatomy are a bit off which is a problem that many artist have to battle. The eyes are a bit too far apart and not symmetrical which my solution for all of this is just to practice! I looked up human anatomy and animal anatomy to learn how to draw furries and anthros better.
I love how much attention to detail you put in the background, I could never do it because of how impatient I am. lol!

Anyways..... just keep practicing ! You're doing great already!

thank you, maybe I should practice my handdrawing.