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Contemplation (WIP) by Graviolies (critique requested)
With nary a word of objection, the President of the United States of America pressed the greasy steel tip of his handgun into his temple and pulled the trigger.
Working on my new novella, any critique would be appreciated. And yes, this will be the first in a series.
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Well, it certainly is an intriguing opening sentence.
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