My first attempt at writing a real story, I know it's probably pretty crap and pretty short but hey, I'm gonna keep trying to improve. But yes, just your average tale of a skunk giving in to her true greed and becoming a big, fat glutton... Might do a part 2 sometime, not completely sure.

But yes, please criticize me and tell me how crap this story is, I want to know what I'm doing wrong so I can improve!

(Edit: Changed the format to PDF to make it a bit easier to read.)