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Summer Joy by FrozenFate (critique requested)

Summer Joy (critique requested)

FrozenFate

Drawing from summer back in 2013.
Ayden is my fursona.

Oc/art is copyrightet to me.

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    I saw you wanted a critique on this artwork, let me say something , this is really good the perspective is really nice. Just a few things that stood out,
    the tail it looks like your tried to squeeze it in there, just let your pen flow and break the frame dont have to try and squeeze it in, the 2nd thing that looks a little missed placed is the ears, from this perspective i think your just barley see the tips of the ear or maybe a tad bit smaller. i like your line style, and it fits into the background really well. last thing i have to say, your teeth anatomy is spot on great work most people dont get them right last last thing i find it hard to see the shading dont be afraid to make it a tad bit darker make it pop and show where the sun is even if its not in the artwork. Your clouds are amazing in detail.

    Alright i hope it helps if your disagree with my tips then thats ok i understand. :3 i hope it helped.

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      This an old drawing from back in summer 2013. I have inproved a lot since. And since i'm not that active here on Weasel yet, haven't I posted some newer stuff yet. I know there are some stuff there could have been better here, but back when I made this drawing I had only got the drawing program in about one and a half month to get used to.
      But thanls for the feedback! hugs