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A Bully Story - [Need to Think of a Chapter Title] by Frost8Bits (critique requested)

A Bully Story - [Need to Think of a Chapter Title] (critique requested)

Frost8Bits

Here it is, the first chapter of my first story! Hope you enjoy and let me know what you think!

Story is about a high school husky being bullied. Pretty typical stuff. If you scrolled down here first before reading the story I can warn you there are gay characters, no yiff, bullying, and violence (non-sexual) before you dive in.

Note: So the description comes at the bottom on this site, Will need to incorporate any introductions at the beginning of the story in the submission.

Note 2: Suggestion for site - For stories at least, put the description at the top before the submission. Kind of pointless to give a description (and any possible warnings) to the reader it they won't get to this section after reading/scrolling past the story.

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