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Pony of the Gears by Foxern

Pony of the Gears

Foxern

If you don't want to download and want to read the more up to date version, you can go and read it on FIMFiction: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82312/pony-of-the-gears

Pony of the Gears in its entirety. A tale following Copper Feather as he tries his best to retire, but things aren't as simple as he'd like. He may be done with his job, but his job isn't done with him. Copper is put in a situation where he can either do a lot of good, or a lot of damage. More damage than he has already. Now he has a chance to fix things, to set things right.

All 18 chapters, all of them edited and done.

When I had originally started writing this I had been a bit hesitant to post it anywhere, not sure why. I'm not afraid of any sort of negative feedback, it's just I wasn't sure it was really...up to snuff, ya know? I tried to sort of get the characters right, and I feel I hit close enough.

Oh well. Shameless oc forcement into an alternate version of Equestria? I dunno. I rather enjoy steampunk, which is what I tried to hint at a bit... Though in the world that I've sort of set up, Equestria is more dependent on magic, rather than technology.

The story mostly takes place mostly in Ponyville in the beginning, with sort of flash backs to places that Copper has been, and things that he's done. Then it goes places, and gets rather crazy.

Sequel; Crossed Gears: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14232595/

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