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Morning Coffie (COMMISSION ART) by Fox-Die (critique requested)

Morning Coffie (COMMISSION ART) (critique requested)

Fox-Die

Another commission Is complete for CorrieZodori CorrieZodori

Character Name: Corrie Zodori

Characters© CorrieZodori CorrieZodori

Please leave a comment and fave please and leave a thums up on my facebook page at "Fox-Die Art Gallery"

ENJOY!!

Submission Information

Views:
740
Comments:
6
Favorites:
10
Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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    Hey bro, this is an AWESOME picture and I've always dug your style. Heck I've seen your improvements over the years I've watched ya which has came a loooong way. Safe to say, a little change in your drawing style too ^_^ Well, I got two major things I want to give a critique on and that's the water droplets. You got the environment down perfectly, you just gotta make the droplets REAL small. What you have here in this image- they are far too big and I couldn't say that it's from a heavy downpour as a benefit of the doubt. And the other thing is the hands... an artist's worst nightmare at times, but can be an easy task after practice X3 One hand has 4 fingers, the other has 3. And there's something about the left hand's fingers seem awkward where they spread in the middle part. But that's not much of an issue though. It's just those two things, the droplets size and the finger count is all. Other than that, Fox-Die my friend- you're the man, the artist, and the top-dog... er FOX! Keep it rockin' baby!

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      Thank you man for your critique. It really helps out In the long run :3

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    Thank you man for your critique. It really helps out In the long run :3

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    Love the character. :) Also, just so you know I don't think you're last couple of replies to the guy above me worked correctly. You need to click on the reply in his comment, it's in the upper right. ;)

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      Oh god your right :( Copy paste HERE I COME !