Ride the Lightning by FiteNite (critique requested)

Ride the Lightning

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Ride the Lightning (critique requested)

FiteNite

January 17, 2014 at 05:53:09 UTC

Ren from Act 4 of WEST. Drawn in December. I'm very happy with how it came out!

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Category:: Visual / Digital

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Kexx on January 17, 2014 at 06:01:41 UTC

Holy crap this is so cool. @//w//@ I really love the lightning effect and how the colours really just feel right. As for critique it looks like the upper body is in a separate position as compared to the lower body? It seems twisted too far. Other than that, this is a fantastic piece!
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  FiteNite on January 17, 2014 at 06:03:42 UTC
  
  Thank you! I think I mucked up the lineworks on her stomach, which makes it look a bit twisted? I'll have to definitely be more careful about where I place any stylized lines in the future, it can turn something from looking normal to looking wonky really quickly!
  I'm glad you like it! :DD
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    Kexx on January 17, 2014 at 06:09:51 UTC
    
    I think it's more of the shirt that makes it seem like that. Hehe. No problem! Hope I've been helpful. <3
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      FiteNite on January 17, 2014 at 06:12:47 UTC
      
      Ahh yes, I see it now. A bit too high up on the left side. Thank you!