So I'm really happy with how rattlesnakes turned out, but the main character's pose has been bugging me, so I wanted to sketch out a proper pitch sequence and see what it should have looked like.

It probably wouldn't have killed me to do this before drawing rattlesnakes. Oh well.

I kinda skipped a frame between #2 and #3. I should fix that.

Critique is very, very welcome. I'm especially iffy about the left forearm/hand in frame 1, and the left leg in frame 2. Hold nothing back; pick this thing to pieces.