It's adorable! I like your almost kemono style, with the small nose and smooth muzzle on young characters.
I came here through the @weasylcritique Twitter account. Is there something in particular you want to improve? I'm no illustrator myself, but I'll try to give constructive feedback!
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I know it's supposed to be a whimsical idea, but the ramifications behind it are kind of terrifying XD