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dead dance by fala (critique requested)

dead dance (critique requested)

fala

fala. Every time I draw her now she is in different stages of ghost-ness.

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246
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Traditional

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    Only thing I can find fault with is that her legs look kinda "off" to me for some reason.

    Nice job.

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    Yeah, her left leg (our right) is a bit off. The underside of the foot should not be showing as much, and perhaps the knee and back of the knee should be a little different in shape as well. The other leg looks kind of wrong as well now that I look at it...that foot should be facing us more, considering how much the knee is facing us.

    Hopefully that helps. I do think this is a beautiful piece aside from that though, the colors and overall design are quite lovely c: I love how flowy it looks.

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      Thanks so much, I see what you are saying. Hopefully your advice will help me to continue to improve.