Bury The Sun by EdwardSebastian (critique requested)

Bury The Sun

Bury The Sun (critique requested)

EdwardSebastian

27 November 2016 at 19:46:28 MST

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand back to posting metal. Wrote this as a mixing exercise on my new interface and wowee wowzers do the vocals come out different now. I'm gonna basically have to totally redo the way I mix them from now on. Otherwise I think it's alright. Let me know in the comments.

Lyrics:
I've got a brand new target in sight
This will be my final display of my might
Don't let this be how your life is defined
Take every chance you can for your soul to be mine

Those sweet dying eyes
Stare at what I've done
Burned what's inside
And buried the sun

I circle as you walk in the dark
My hands will stop your heart
You scream to no one as I tear you apart
My hands will stop your heart

Those sweet dying eyes
Stare at what I've done
Burned what's inside
And buried the sun
Those sweet dying eyes
Stare at what I've done
Burned what's inside
And buried the sun

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