The Commissar by Domnul Eduard

The Commissar

Domnul Eduard

14 November 2015 at 09:40:21 MST

A short story about one of Communism's greatest atrocities ever made seen through the eyes of one forced to commit it.

I wrote this some time ago, thought I should share it.

Enjoy!

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    Incredible - what an awesome story!

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      Your comment, and your subsequent favourite and follow are most appreciated!

      If you truly liked it, I wholly recommend you to check up my other works, as well!

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        I will definitely be doing so as I get the time :).

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    There's two things I can add here.

    First: from the historical distance, it seems funny how oligo-capitalism is doing basically the same thing as holodomor, only at a bit slower rate.

    Second: it would give story a magnificent ending if you could add a contrasting scene in a more modern-day Soviet Union, where an elderly commissar teaches his children the other kind of history, how the past is forgotten and only the strongest survives.