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My world is broken, yet I cannot remember how. I stand alone against the odds and while I fear the solitude, what is to come does not scare me. Nothing will be the same.
One of my first furry artist hero's dnapalmhead inspired me to do this art.
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Anatomy wise Iv always had my limits but Im trying to improve. This is really my first extreme lighting picture so mistakes were to be expected. I realize its not perfect but I did it for fun and to test myself and expressed my personal feelings at the time well. Next time I will try to do better but overall Im impressed with what I was able to do. Thanks for the review and Ill try to keep those ideas in mind in the future.
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Tiomara
My Critique! Take it or leave it!
You've got a good thing going here! A great understanding of lighting and backing, which says a lot more. Your anatomy is mostly good and the energy of the picture is conveyed well.
The things that could use improvement from worst to least worst!
1) Your pose is well done, however a little off with the face. Unless he were starting to look over his shoulder, his eye wouldn't be as visible, and would actually be hidden slightly by his ear! The general arch of the back is conveyed, however with the arch and the way his feet are, it's like his lower half is completely disconnected from his upper half. His right foot should be forward some more, and the emphasis on his glutes would also help with that. His right arm would also be forward. IF he is meant to be in that pose, then his tail would probably be facing directly towards the viewer. As an anatomy take you are good, except for his left arm, unless he's a gorilla, his forearm should be shorter, and the tips of his fingers should only come down to halfway down his thigh.
2) His direction of the stare is awkward, but doable if the rest of the body follows.
3) even with heavy shadowing, the lighting would outline his body if it is coming from forefront, but if coming from the side there would still be highlights along his tail and right arm.
Hope this helps!