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Friends Flight Remake by Delphadae (critique requested)

Friends Flight Remake (critique requested)

Delphadae

A remake of an old picture I drew back in 2012. The two people are my friend and I's rpg characters (Mithose is the black haired guy, and Zali is the blonde girl).

Overall, I'm really proud of how the picture turned out. :)

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    Pretty great. Love the lighting on the sunset, awesome use of colors and the tops of the trees are very well shaded. Wings look good and anatomically correct, if a little bit stiff.

    The pose of Mithose looks a little bit off and his right pupil should be up a little more, looks a little like a lazy eye, but other than all those little nitpicks, I rate 7/10, very complete work, just a few little things here and there.

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      Thank you for the critique! Anatomy is something I'm trying to improve, but still struggle with a lot (So your comment is very helpful). :)

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    Me too. Real good anatomy is a lot of artist's kryptonite. Sooner or later though, you'll break a sort of threshold and it'll start just coming naturally to you!

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      That's true. With enough practice (trying to practice more by drawing figure drawing references and such)