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Home contest 1 by DeleteAccount (critique requested)

Home contest 1 (critique requested)

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Entry for the Home Contest held by Johaan-N
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Name: Torgeir “Thor's Spear”
Breed: Southern Jaro (85%) x Rifle (15%)
Father: Unknown (deceased)
Mother: Unknown (deceased)
Siblings: Unknown (deceased)
Former Pack: Thunder Coats Clan (deceased)
Age: 3 years
Gender: Female
Mate: None
Love interest: None
Offspring: None
Fertility: 62%

Bio: Torgeir was a former fighting slave, branded by the Thunder Coats Clan, a powerful Warrior excellent in both long range and close combat. Traded along with others into the Clan by another village for protection, she was to be branded for breeding, (brand on stomach for breeding for females), but her fighting spirit saved her from that side of life (brand on right thigh for fighters). She's only known the harsh life of being used by others in the fighting pits, for only the strongest are allowed to serve, others shall die in shame. After two and a half years in servitude, Torgeir's Clan was struck down from the inside, snuffing out the fires that protected them and brought the Night Beasts to end them.

Torgeir is hard bearing and blunt to a fault, but she is greatly reliable and trustworthy to those she chooses. Though with how she was treated before, her trust and loyalty is the hardest to get.

Name: Orvar “Arrow”
Breed: American Bulldog
Father: Unknown (deceased)
Mother: Unknown (deceased)
Siblings: Unknown (deceased)
Former Pack: Thunder Coats Clan (deceased)
Age: Ten months
Gender: Male
Mate: None
Love interest: None
Offspring: None
Fertility: 52%

Bio: Orvar was a former slave, bred for fighting and branded by the Thunder Coats Clan(male fighters have the brand on the right shoulder).
And was saved by Torgeir before the Clan fell into the jaws of the Night Beasts.

The blades poison is from the Wolpertinger. This was taken from the ruins of the TCC as well as most weapons, armor, and tents that they haul around.

A bit of a goof ball, Orvar is kind with a strong sense of justice about him, though he's barely a year old and has plenty to learn, he has the makings of a leader.

Now Torgeir and Orvar live in between Slate Forest and Shadow Brook. Always on the move, they have a mobile sled to carry tents and weapons. They never stay in one place too long.

Just wanted to post it here

Art/design by kumotogi

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