My critic :
It seems a little off how he wield his weapons. It doesn't seem natural, since the hands are not inclined the same way as the handles, it feels like he is only carrying them with his index and thumbs. Keep in mind that if you have a sword in your hand, you have to grip the handle with all of your fingers =)
You also need to work on the light. You seems to know how to give a bit of depth, but your light source seems to come from multiple ways at once.
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Almarane
My critic :
It seems a little off how he wield his weapons. It doesn't seem natural, since the hands are not inclined the same way as the handles, it feels like he is only carrying them with his index and thumbs. Keep in mind that if you have a sword in your hand, you have to grip the handle with all of your fingers =)
You also need to work on the light. You seems to know how to give a bit of depth, but your light source seems to come from multiple ways at once.
I hope that'll help =)