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WIP Sans run cycle by CrystalGryphon (critique requested)

WIP Sans run cycle (critique requested)

CrystalGryphon

I suddenly have a lot of motivation to animate, so OF COURSE i had to animate sans. It wasn't going to be sans at first, but here we are.
I'm already really proud of it. I still need to line and color it. Maybe shade it?

I'd really like some critique! I've never animated humanoids before, so it'd really help me out! ;v;

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    looks great! Maybe have him run after something in the final (like baby papy? i cant think of any other reasons sans would run except to protect his brother)

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      Thank you! I wasn't going to add anything extra, but that's a really good idea! I might try that. c:

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    Hope you don't mind me commenting on this despite being a little old.
    This run has a really good rhythm so far! but the arms should swing in the opposite way from the legs - so when he has his legs at peak stride and you see the back of his pants, you should be able to see his chest, rather than his back. Also on frame 6, try drawing the foot somewhere between the positions of frame 5 and frame 7. Having it close to frame 5 was a good instinct on your part, it just need to be nudged a little so the transition between frames is less sudden.

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      It's totally fine! I always love getting critique, whether the picture is old or not.
      Yeah, I realized I had the arms backwards a little while after I did this, haha. And I was wondering why that part looked odd! I'll fix them both when i finally get around to finishing this, thank you!