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thank you very much for the critique! the head i'm a little but better at drawing now and when i drew i didn't use any anatomy things like drawing circles and ovals for the head and body or things like that. i was in a car and i started to just draw random ly starting with the crystal in his hand and everything else just followed.
by the way i'm glad you like the leaves as they were the hardest thing to draw this time. :)
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Bliss.in.Oblivion
Ahoy! Critique wanted, you say? :P
So the first thing I'm noticing iiiiiis that you did that hand really well o~o Hands are hard and that's.... really good. The one thing I'd say about it is that it looks a little bit thin, but that might be a stylistic thing.
Next, it looks kind of like he's leaning forward. What I'd do is I'd push the pelvis/hip just a little bit more forward so that the shoulders and the hip are a little more straight up and down.
Another thing is that the arm is extended, but the shoulder is still fairly close to its rest position. When you extend your arm, your shoulder moves forward with it, to the point where it's actually at least partially in front of your rib cage.
BUT. I might just not see this right. In which case, change all that to that you should try to clear up the ambiguity a little bit.
The head needs some work but that would take a lot of writing :s If you want to know for that, I'll gladly help out, but I'll restrain myself for now.
I like it, though! The leaves are pretty :>