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A Dream Untrue by Chibiabos (critique requested)
When I graze the sweetest grass,
It recalls my hunger for you
When at night my eyes shut at last,
In my dreams by your love I'm enraptured
When I see the sparkle in your eyes,
When I see the gleam of your horn
My heart dances and my soul flies,
But I fear in asking this we'd be torn,
Do you love me as I deeply love you?
Do you hear my heart gallop toward you?
Does Equus long for us to become two?
Or is my mere fantasy a dream untrue?
When I gaze upon the stars at night,
I wonder where below them you are
When rain seeps into my coat so light,
I feel your soul seep into my heart
When I chance a gaze upon your coat,
When my ears hear a whicker from you,
My heart warms and my soul hums a note
But I am mute with fear in asking you...
Do you love me as deeply as I love you?
Do you hear my heart gallop toward you?
Does Equus long for us to become two?
Or is my mere fantasy a dream untrue?
Song lyrics I wrote for a friend's novel (in the novel, the protagonist sings this to a romantic interest). It is from the perspective of a unicorn stallion vying for a unicorn mare.
I wrote the lyrics; the novel they go to was (aside from these lyrics) written by Calydor Estallon. Chama C. Fox graciously composed music and recorded (though, unfortunately, not for public redistribution) the actual song (which, it is my understanding, he has also performed at a couple Eurofurence conventions).
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