this pen was commissioned by   crystumes

i still have yet to put the finishing gloss coat on it but i'm a little unsure if i should change some things first.

the inside of her mouth is rather dark and makes her look extra creepy, which i kinda like but i dunno, maybe i should change that?

also, i took an artistic liberty and made the pen shaft that teal color. i could have just made it white like the rest of her body is but that part wouldn't really be her body. its her head and tail on a pen and i felt making that teal kinda complemented the abstractness? of the pen.... plus i really liked how her claws and teeth were a greenish color and i just thought it would look cool like this :/

but i am totally open to painting it white. so yea, this is here for her feedback