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Bride of Aidoneus *short story* Part 3 and 4 by CatnelD

Bride of Aidoneus *short story* Part 3 and 4

CatnelD

Bride of Aidoneus short story Part 3 and 4- This is an Other character Story

Aidoneus © Me
Rose Desire © Me
Sorrow © Me
Discord © Hasbro
Rarity © Hasbro
Fluttershy © Hasbro

“Why are we in Ponyville?” Sorrow asked as he looked around nervously. He had turned himself into a reptilian creature that resembled an iguana.

“This is where Rarity lives and I ordered my dress from her.” Rose said as she walked beside Sorrow. “Stop acting like that.”

“Discord lives here.” He whispered as he crawled on all fours.

“I know. If Aiden hadn’t sent you with me I was going to visit him. But he had to send you with me. Now be quiet and just follow me.” She walked down the street towards Carousel Boutique. She suddenly skid to a halt when she saw Discord go into the dress shop with Fluttershy. “Aww, horse nuggets.”

Sorrow muttered “I knew it, we’re screwed.”

“I’m not.” She said softly. “Sorrow maybe you should um wait out here?”

“Aidoneus sent me to protect you. I can’t go against his will.” He whispered. “He’s got a tight leash on me. If you’re out of my sight for too long I start to get in extreme pain.” His tongue slid out.

“Discord won’t recognize you if you’d just keep quiet and stay away from him.” Rose muttered, “Come on.”

She walked up to the door, took in a deep breath and walked in.

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The bell on the door rang.

“Oh! My one o’clock appointment is here!” Rarity said as she got up from the kitchen table. “Sorry darlings; I really didn’t think she’d be here early.”

Fluttershy smiled. “It’s okay Rarity. Thanks for inviting us over for lunch.”

Discord took Fluttershy’s sandwich and started to eat it. “So who is your customer that decides to come early to appointments?”

“It’s the royal archivist Rose Desire. She’s being fitted for her wedding dress.” Rarity said as she walked out of the kitchen.

Discord coughed. “Rose? Wedding dress?”

Fluttershy looked at him in concern. “Are you okay?”

“Maybe I heard Rarity wrong. She didn’t say Rose Desire.” He rubbed his ear and then his temple.

Fluttershy nodded. “She did, she said your sister’s name. I didn’t know she was getting married. How exciting.” She smiled.

He looked at his wife. “Why didn’t she tell us she was getting married?”

“Maybe she wanted it to be a surprise?” Fluttershy shrugged. “Or she was going to tell us today?” She gave a helpful smile.

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