So this was actually done like early this year but I thought I might as well show it. I wanted to see how much I've grown, and I;ve gotten so much better with line art. It is my goal to see how the comic looks after a redo eventually, but first I want to finish book 1 with all 5 chapters. See where I am then and take a break to do a lot of side stuff. I've got lofty goals but thank you everyone who is following this project.