I Ain't Your Sacrifice by Bad Dragor (critique requested)

I Ain't Your Sacrifice (critique requested)

Bad Dragor

13 August 2016 at 13:55:30 MDT

Black and red Alicorn with a tragic past stays confident despite the odds stacked against him. He is protective and liked by his peers. Even in the worst possible situation, he stays in control. Or does he?

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