LETS POINT OUT THE POSE CHOICES WHERE HARD

I tried over and over again to make sure the poses look fricken right. I dont know if this pose looks okay.

this is a pose commission wip preview for a SAO commission request from NekoKamiSann [From Deviantart]

She requested a SAO commission and i dont know why its taking long and its honestly the poses to make sure one doesnt look weird and such UGH ;;n;; what do you guys think?

SAO © by: Reki Kawahara
Artwork © by: FullmetalPunk