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Athy- Kill La Kill fanart final by athdaraxen (critique requested)
Dang.
This is awesome.
This turned out much better than I expected it to. I tried more of a hard shading and I really think it worked out well for this. I'm just so happy I didn't mess this up, its was way complicated. Yay
Kill La Kill © Trigger
Athy and Art © to me. <3
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Thank you! That was part of the reason I wanted to do it. I felt I could make it work on her! I still need to get around to doing Junketsu as well. I have it sketched I just never inked/colored it.
As for the lines, they are something I've been trying to improve on(traditionally and digitally). It's something I feel I am rather weak in. For this I did not use a stroke stabilizer. I think I tried to find one or something but it didn't work out so u did what I could. Its OK though! I've gotten better and this is probably one of my better pieces line work wise! I appreciate you pointing it all though. This is probably some of the best critique I've gotten and that means a lot to me. I will continue to do my best to improve! Thank you so very much for taking the time to write this all out!
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Cool!
Yeah, linework can be tricky to get down. I always thought it was a lot easier to do traditionally, because the feedback is a lot more immediate and you get a better perspective of the whole piece at once. But I'm sure you'll find your stride!
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Ahh, I don't normally get hooked on animes but Kill la kill was one that I did. The costume goes well here, I'm liking how you tied it to the horns. =3
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It is definitely one that grabs your attention! Thank you so much. <3
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Nice work, that costume is overdesigned af so I appreciate the effort put into detailing it.
I think you made it work well with your character's design too, the red/purple motif fits right in.
My major critique would be that the line weights are a bit inconsistent, most noticeably around the sword. If you're using a software that has a stroke stabilizer you could try turning it up a bit to see if that makes it easier for you to work with. I personally crank it way up for lining because my hands are a bit shaky and I want the lines to be as crisp as I can get em'