WtV, WiP: The children of Earth - Chapter 1; link2file by AriesHausdorff (critique requested)

WtV, WiP: The children of Earth - Chapter 1; link2file (critique requested)

AriesHausdorff

28 August 2016 at 07:02:20 MDT

http://aries.homeftp.net/publish/welcome_to_valhalla/wtv-texts/files/The_children_of_Earth.pdf

The PDF so far exceeds the allowed filesize, so I provide a link to download.
Comments please go here, for uniformity.

Update: This is basically always the most current revision!

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