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NORTH SOUTH RUSH by Archtype:Oni (critique requested)

NORTH SOUTH RUSH (critique requested)

Archtype:Oni

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    Something looks a little lopsided as far as perspective, but I'm not sure if it's the character or area. If I make a horizontal line with the buildings facing up, the cart and ramen shop seems to be going inward the bridge as if it's getting pushed by something. The character itself looks like it is about to fall off as he's running, which I'm not sure if this if it's suppose to be like that because of the boxes near him. Coloring and linework are fine, but the bridge shading needs a bit sprucing up.

    The Gyazo will show what I mean
    http://i.gyazo.com/5db6af59c0517219d78df2d58e79f702.png