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Shallow Song by ApolloMerriwether (critique requested)

Shallow Song (critique requested)

ApolloMerriwether

Artist's block is an incredibly frustrating experience, so it seems fitting that it inspired one of my favorite tracks of late.

Lyrics

I wrote some music today
Nothing in the words
A hollow tune to play
Once upon a time they
Swelled with life from a
Heart that's become clay

I wrote a sad song today
Something in the sound
Lacked feelings that would stay
I wish that I could relay
A little of how I feel
But the feeling's gone away

Hey~
Why's the music gone so flat
Oooh, oooooh
Hey~
Ohhh~

I tried to jot down a letter
Thinkin' I'd feel better
Once I got my thoughts up on the wall
Isn't it funny how
The one song I get running now
Just whines about how I can't write at all

Hey~
Why's the music gone so flat
Oooh, oooooh
Hey~
Ohhh~

Now there's something in the sound
Like rain upon my soul
And it burns me like some acid
Leaves a hole
I don't want the music to hurt me
But I can't get away
When the emptiness leaves a vacuum
Light flees from the day

There! In silence a scream!
Probably just a hope
But it sounds so real to me

The straws I grasp for are brittle
Even just a little
Meaning warms me like the sun
Every word drains me now
Each song adds to this darkened cloud
Each time I wonder if I'm finally done

Hey~
Why's the music gone so flat
Oooh, oooooh
Hey~
Ohhh~

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